04 November 2012

Paper editing

If you said "I don't love this..." do we have to change it? I can't think of anything better. It's in my intro. I asked you about it when I was writing it and you said it was fine, but then you wrote on my paper it wasn't. It's just that scenario with the friends listening to music in the car. Suggestions?
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  1. Mrs. MoonSun Nov 04, 01:37:00 PM 2012

    Yeah--I think the scenario is fine, but if I remember correctly, I think it was just the wording. Maybe it sounded odd. Can you just work on the actual semantics?

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  2. UnknownSun Nov 04, 02:28:00 PM 2012

    Okay thanks!

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