Paper

For this paragraph you said I should move it to the beginning because it seems out of place, but my Roman numeral topic is physiological effects and the subtopic is mental. The first sentence talks about medicine/Greek mythology, but it goes into the mental aspect of the connection to the arts and the mental effects that getting rid of the arts has on the students. So it wouldn't make sense to move it. Can I leave it or make any changes to it that would make it fit better?