Mrs. Moon,
I've tried fixing my topic and argument and connecting them better. I came up with my overall topic as global warming and the argument being it's detramental to the biosphere. In my paper as one of the prongs I'll talk about how it can be proved through the marine life/oceans, that way it will still work with my product with volunteering at the aquarium. Do you think this could work?
Should I add to the argument its existence and detramental affects to the biosphere can be proven? That way it would be an actual argument, or would the original one work?
ReplyDeleteYes--say that global warming is a scientific, provable occurrance and then say something about it can be proven through the detramental effects to the ocean/marine life as well as the biosphere!
ReplyDeleteSounds good!